Writing Revolution Part 2

Second attempt at sentences by the children-the improvement is obvious!

Ahmed:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because the world will change and we will have a severe future if it is not stopped.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so we can stop it and protect the future of the following generations.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but we should also tackle the coronavirus as our number priority so we can stop the deaths of millions a day.

Zaina:

1-We should tackle climate change as a priority because if we don’t, the earth will heat up, animals will suffer, sea levels rise, ice-free Antarctica,floods and people will suffer as well as the next generation will suffer too.                                                                

2-We should tackle climate change as a priority so we can the earth by turning off lights, turning off devices when not in use and recycling rubbish instead of putting them in general waste.                                                                                                                  3-We should tackle climate change as a priority but the world government doesn’t  take it seriously.

Mu’Min:

  1. We should tackle climate change as a priority because wildlife is decreasing, lots of natural disasters are happening and the world is getting polluted so people’s life span shortens.
  2. We should tackle climate change as a priority so one of the biggest missions to tackle on earth has gone and people won’t take much stress because of coronavirus , which is an even bigger mission , and lockdown we should consider what we through away.
  3. We should tackle climate change as a priority but surprisingly it is decreasing due to coronavirus but still we should be getting to net zero.

Ibrahim:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because if we don’t stop climate change people will start dying from  dehydration 
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so there will be less emissions in the world which will reduce the temperature in the summer so people won’t take the risk of dying. 
  • We should tackle climate change but some people may still be working in there factories and people may not have enough money to buy hybrid cars or use public transport. 

Muaad:

1.We should tackle climate change as a priority because it will save the world and everyone could live a happy and enjoyable life.

2.We should tackle climate change as a priority so people should start trying hard to save our planet.

3.We should tackle climate change as a priority but we should also convince many other people to do the same.

Husna:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because it is causing disasters such as global warming, deforestation, bushfires, animal extinction, and even the destruction of our planet.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so the world is clean and free of pollution and harmful air, which damages all life.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but we should also take note of the millions of people suffering from lack of medical aid, no shelter and starvation.

Munira:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because we are the last generation that can stop climate change and  we have everything we need to stop it.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so  recycle different materials and reuse the ones we can.
  • we should make climate change a priority but those in power  won’t listen so make your voice heard by those in power.

Tayyab:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because it is changing our world into something else that if we see it we will not like.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so that the future generation will still have a place to live and that they can see the beauty of the earth as well.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but should also try to do it quickly so that later we shall not have this headache in our head but can sit peacefully and enjoy it

Hafsah:

1.We should tackle climate change as a priority because,if we do not act now catastrophic events may occur and life will be different in the future.

2. We should tackle climate change as a priority, so that polar bears do not go extinct and other innocent animals don’t lose their habitats because of bushfires and for our land.

3. We should tackle climate change as a priority but, due to the coronavirus we must delay as people are locked at home which is actually good for climate change

Aaminah:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because as the earth heats up, places like the antarctic are melting; melting icebergs allow the sea level to rise greatly and this can lead to floods.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so that wildlife can be safe and secure; animals in large woodland areas are put in danger when even a cigarette can spark and burn.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but we should also understand how important it is to improve and upgrade the world; factories that release toxic gasses that are terrible for the earth, make different items that people enjoy. Even though the factories are bad, we still need them to make things that people need and use.

Ismail:

  • We could tackle climate change as a priority because there is no planet B If you are a diligent person who is serious about planning your future and avoiding unnecessary suffering and loss.
  • We could tackle climate change as a priority so that we can have a planet that is clean and healthy with no litter, with clear blue rivers  and oceans where we can breathe fresh  clean air. This would mean fish and sea creatures can live healthy lives without careless people polluting everywhere.
  • We could tackle climate change as a priority but still people don’t care about their planet as they think that the planet is nothing however, this is not right because if there were no planets we would not live so we should take this into consideration.

Hasan:

We should tackle climate change as a priority because we need fresh and clean air.

We should tackle climate  change as a priority so we should plant more trees so that there is less carbon dioxide.

We should tackle climate  change as a priority but we can  use cars but not that much.

Zeynab:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because if we don’t act now the future generation will not act and then finally the world will overheat and no one will live 
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so we should not be sitting around waiting for someone else to act, we should act now and help those in other countries which are already dying like Australia . 
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but we shouldn’t go too hard on it, just make those who don’t listen, listen although this is serious, it is not worth getting hurt over .  

Yusuf:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because, if we don’t, not only are we destroying our home but we are also killing our own kin and ourselves. We won’t be able to live because of the lack of oxygen and most of the animals won’t be able to live as well  thus causing exponential decrease in food which can cause many problems.
  • We should tackle climate change so generations after us can feel the sunlight and can breathe the fresh air as well as look at the luscious green plants instead of breathing acrid air and look at the dead and black plants.
  • We should tackle climate change but people still litter recklessly amongst the world and some people don’t care and still pollute the earth rather than protecting their home.

Maysoon:

  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority because it can damage many plants, animals and severely injure or even kill humans; many people from foreign countries are already suffering badly because of the fumes let out from factories and the lack of oxygen.
  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority so that the world (and everything in it) can benefit from the great bounties that it holds; many changes have already been made in our way of life and several protests have been held to tackle the problem of Climate Change: hopefully it will be enough.
  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority but many people still think (even after all of the damage it has caused) that Climate Change is a silly myth and that there are more important things in the world, but really, it should be addressed to as first priority as it could be the difference between life and death to all living things, whether we like it or not.

Ferdows:

We should tackle climate change as a priority because if we do not change many people will suffer because of this,which is not fair for them,and an example of this is bushfires which took place in Australia and killed over a billion of animals and thousands of humans.

We should tackle climate change as a priority so many disasters do not occur like floods which are happening in Scotland and so that we do not risk many people’s lives in the line.

We should tackle climate change as a priority but many people do not listen even though people are protesting about it and shouting so people change but people do not listen

Juwayriya: 

  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority because if it happens it will get really hot and we will all die.
  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority so instead of dying we can all use electric cars; plant loads of trees and plants to give us oxygen; not to take drugs and recycle to live in a better, healthier world .  
  • We should tackle Climate Change as a priority but we shouldn’t just go on streets screaming our heads off like lunatics just for climate change. That will never get people interested however they will get angry, also we shouldn’t just go crazy over climate change and we should really worry about the coronavirus, attacks, Iraq and other important things.  

Yumna:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because it is a high threat to not only humankind but the whole world itself; it is dangerous, not-environmental friendly and if we don’t put it as priority, then the world as we know it will end.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so that people actually realise that life isn’t a game and as a reminder that anything can happen anytime or anywhere; also so that the world doesn’t end and we can continue our generation for a few more hundred years.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but right now the world is facing if not bigger, more dangerous threats such as the coronavirus, so they should wait for this pandemic to leave first before dealing with climate change.

Zain:

  1.  We could help tackle climate change as a priority because if we don’t tackle it our beautiful world will get really hot and it will go away in a few years time.
  2. We could help tackle climate change as a priority so everyone in the world should stop using plastic water bottles and etc and throw their litter in the bin.
  3. We could help tackle climate change as a priority but people don’t listen and instead they still use the stuff we don’t need in this world .  If only presidents and prime ministers ever listen to little children and start to get involved with climate change . 

Haadee:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because if we don’t we could all die; the poles would melt, leaving polar bears and penguins endangered, furthermore, the extra water would cause chaos and confusion as cities would be submerged. 
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so that our planet could be saved from the horrible end we steered it into, so the wildfires, flooding and other extreme weather stops, so that our yet to come generations won’t have problems on an even larger scale than ours.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but not to do it abruptly, but over some time, for example: gas- fired plants was most used (40%) in 2018 and a total of 86% of power coming from nuclear, gas and coal in 2012, meaning that if we do it rapidly, people could be left without power.

Mohamed:

  • We should tackle climate change as a priority because there is only one place that we can inhabit and if it is scarred by climate change we won’t get to live most of our lives.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority so we don’t die as the world is getting hotter and the ice caps are melting so there are floods so we will drown.
  • We should tackle climate change as a priority but there are a lot of people who make a lot of money destroying the Earth like selling fossil fuels so they won’t agree as making money is more important to them than saving the Earth.